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One of the best ways to raise money when you're participating
in a run/walk event is a fundraising letter. This is also
one of the easiest fundraisers! You are simply writing a letter
to family and friends asking them to join you in supporting
a worthy charity. Your only costs are for paper and postage,
so all of the proceeds go directly to the cause.
Fundraising Letters asking for a financial gift work especially well
for organizations that support a specific cause. This includes
groups such as health advocacy, hunger or disaster relief,
and public arts such as museums and symphonies. These are
groups that people can easily identify as contributing to
the community and the world.
Understanding why people respond to fundraising letters is
important. The fundraising letter should appeal to the concerns and motivations
of the reader. Cold facts and statistics may be interesting,
but generally will not win over new supporters. Make the cause
"real" to your reader, and show them why they should care
about it.
Some of the reasons why people donate:
1. Because you asked - This is the number one reason people
give. If the fundraising letter comes from a personal friend or family
member the reader is even more likely to donate.
2. Personal interests - Your fundraising letter is most likely to appeal
to those who have a personal interest in your cause. People
who are already interested in the cause will appreciate the
work of the charity. They may also enjoy keeping informed
about news and the latest developments in that subject area.
For example, someone who has a family history of cancer may
be more likely to support a health or cancer related charity.
People who already have an affinity for your subject area
will be more likely to donate.
3. People believe their monetary gift will make a difference
- You are offering a way for people to contribute to society
simply by writing a check. They are helping to solve a problem,
one that they otherwise would not be able to on their own.
4. People are generous - Giving is a deeply held value for
many people. Giving to charitable causes reinforces our belief
that we are good people.
Get Ready to Write
1. Decide who your audience is for your fundraising letter. Are they
current supporters or new donors? How familiar are they with
your cause? This will effect your tone and the material you
choose to write about.
Tip: If you are doing a walk for charity, you will
primarily be writing to people who already know you: your
friends and family.
2. Anticipate the reader's questions and answer them. When
someone receives a fundraising letter, many questions arise,
even if subconsciously. They will wonder…Who is this group?
Are they reputable? Will the donation go to the cause or administrative
costs? How much do I have to send? On a sheet of paper brainstorm
all the many questions that could arise when someone gets
your fundraising letter. Think of as many as possible, be they obvious
or obscure. Now on the right hand side, next to each question,
write a brief answer. Review the list and prioritize which
questions are most important. You can use your answers later
when you start to craft your fundraising letter.
3. Ask for a specific suggested donation amount in the fundraising letter.
Tie this amount to something tangible. For example, "your
gift of just $15 will feed one needy family this holiday season."
Don't be afraid to ask for a specific amount. Your supporters
will feel comfortable that their donation is not too small
or too large. Plus, some people will give more than your suggested
amount.
4. What date would you like the response back? Giving a deadline
increases the sense of urgency for the reader, and the number
of responses.
5. Get an idea about what has worked for other fundraisers.
Collect fundraising letters you get in the mail, and view other sample
fundraising letters. Make observations about style and content.
Make it Personal
Before we begin writing, let's just daydream a little. Imagine
that you are talking to a friend face to face. You say, "Hey,
did you hear about the XYC issue?" Your enthusiasm is evident,
so your friend is intrigued, "No, tell me about them." You
describe the cause or situation and why it is so important.
You relate the cause to a personal situation, or tell a heart
wrenching story about someone effected by XYZ. Now your friend
is thinking, "Gosh this is a terrible situation, someone should
do something." You tell them how a worthy charity needs funds
so it can solve this problem. A specific financial gift will
greatly help the XYZ Foundation help people in need. You ask
for the donation and your friend pulls out the checkbook!
This might be a simplified version, but you get the idea.
Write the fundraising letter as if you are talking to someone. Be personable.
If possible, include a true story of someone effected by the
cause and/or how your organization has helped them. This helps
the reader identify with the need. They will feel like they
are helping an individual rather than a vague idea.
Write directly to the questions you brainstormed about earlier.
Answer the questions, and you have reduced the possibility
of rejection. You are easing people's fears about sending
a gift. Your supporters will feel good about donating to the
cause.
Finally, remember to ask for the gift. You are offering your
reader the chance to help with a worthy cause. Get them to
take direct action today, without delay!
Remember the Basics
While you want to make your fundraising letter personal, don't forget
the basics of writing.
- Keep the fundraising letter to 1-2 pages, any longer and your reader
may loose interest.
- Make the message easy to understand, don't get bogged
down in too many numbers or jargon they may not know.
- Keep your fundraising letter focused on the topic; don't chase rabbits.
- Remember to use Standard English, good grammar and correct
spelling.
- Sign the fundraising letter! Your letter comes from someone in particular,
not just the group.
- Catch the readers eye If possible include pictures. These
can be black and white or color, and printed on the fundraising letter
itself. Again, this helps put a face to your cause.
- Use of text features such as bold and underline, if used
appropriately can further enhance your message.
- Use short paragraphs, with a space in between each.
- Use standard margins of 1 to 1 ½ inches on each side of
the page.
- Be sure to use a font that is easy to read with a minimum
10 pt, preferably 11 or 12-pt size.
- Include a return address, phone number, web address and
email contact if possible.
Make it Easy to Respond
Requesting a specific gift amount is the first step in making
the response easy. To further ease your donor's response,
include a response card, and pre-addressed return envelope.
If possible, make the envelope postage paid.
One Final Review
Ask others in your group to read your fundraising letter and give feedback.
Also ask people not familiar with the organization, so you
can get a fresh perspective. Get someone with a flair for
writing and a keen eye to proofread. Decide what changes you
want to make, and edit the fundraising letter.
Check Your Mailbox
Seeing those return envelopes in your mailbox is exciting!
You may be surprised at who responds and how generous people
are. Be sure to keep track of your reponses, who donates and
in what amounts.
Sending thank you letters or notes is very important. These
can be handwritten notes, or typed letters as long as you
sign them. When I did Team in Training, I bought thank you
cards and hand wrote the message. After the marathon, I sent
pictures of me with my medal to some of my supporters. You
may think of other ways to personally thank your supporters.
Tax receipts need to be sent to people who donate over a
certain amount. If you are participating in a walk/run event,
the charity usually handles this.
Follow up with those who do not respond within a few weeks.
A phone call, email, or postcard will work. Many times people
intend to respond, but simply have forgotten.
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About the Author: Sandra Sims has been participating in walk/run event
fundraisers for over 10 years. She is the editor and publisher of Step By
Step Fundraising, a resource for volunteer fundraisers participating in
charity run/walk events. Visit Step By Step Fundraising to
find out more.© 2003 Sandra Sims